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	<title>Comments on: Random Thoughts While Reading Theory: Technique of Art</title>
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		<title>By: PeterMBall</title>
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		<dc:creator>PeterMBall</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Aug 2009 01:06:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You know, if you hadn&#039;t included the exclamation points I&#039;d have processed that little slip a lot sooner :)</description>
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		<title>By: Chris Green</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chris Green</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 03 Aug 2009 11:11:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Peter,

Very cool.  I fiercely love stories that give me something new, or a new angle on the &quot;known&quot;.

Writing about the physical act is a cool idea, and it reminds me of another writer game I like to play.  As I read, at the bottom of the page (if it interrupts the sentence) or when I have to turn the page, I guess what the next word in the sentence will be.  Sometimes it isn&#039;t a fair game, as the next word is obvious, but I find that 8 or 9 times out of 10 the writers who are really writing a story that&#039;s engrossing (Link, King, etc) do not use the word I&#039;d expect them to use.  It&#039;s fascinating, and it really keeps your mind focused on the story, as opposed to sliding into cruise control.

Hope that makes sense.

Also, thanks for all the linkage!  I&#039;ll try to work out a nice, subtle way to point out that the link to Reservations links to Nossa Morte as well...  Ha!  Not subtle at all, and three exclamation points for you!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Peter,</p>
<p>Very cool.  I fiercely love stories that give me something new, or a new angle on the &#8220;known&#8221;.</p>
<p>Writing about the physical act is a cool idea, and it reminds me of another writer game I like to play.  As I read, at the bottom of the page (if it interrupts the sentence) or when I have to turn the page, I guess what the next word in the sentence will be.  Sometimes it isn&#8217;t a fair game, as the next word is obvious, but I find that 8 or 9 times out of 10 the writers who are really writing a story that&#8217;s engrossing (Link, King, etc) do not use the word I&#8217;d expect them to use.  It&#8217;s fascinating, and it really keeps your mind focused on the story, as opposed to sliding into cruise control.</p>
<p>Hope that makes sense.</p>
<p>Also, thanks for all the linkage!  I&#8217;ll try to work out a nice, subtle way to point out that the link to Reservations links to Nossa Morte as well&#8230;  Ha!  Not subtle at all, and three exclamation points for you!</p>
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