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		<title>Claw</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Feb 2009 07:52:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[The problem with writing a thesis is that it&#8217;s just no fun to talk about. The novella, on the other hand, creates the kinds of problems that I find interesting . And thus there is nattering on about it on the blog. The nifty thing about getting back to this story is that I&#8217;ve had the first scene in my head for a long while now &#8211; Miriam Aster holding a gun to a cat&#8217;s head, threatening it for information on the sly while the owner is off in the kitchen making some tea. The details around that image have shifted a bit since I first came up with it &#8211; originally she&#8217;d gone there looking for the cat, forcing her to bluff her way past the owner, but now seeing the cat is a by-product of showing up to talk to someone else. On the whole it&#8217;s lots of fun &#8211; both because Aster is the kind of character who takes threatening a feline in her stride and because the cat is becoming increasingly creepy and unpleasant as I go along &#8211; but it&#8217;s also trading an aweful lot on backstory that&#8217;s hard to drop in on the fly. And, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The problem with writing a thesis is that it&#8217;s just no fun to talk about. The novella, on the other hand, creates the kinds of problems that I find interesting . And thus there is nattering on about it on the blog.</p>
<p>The nifty thing about getting back to this story is that I&#8217;ve had the first scene in my head for a long while now &#8211; Miriam Aster holding a gun to a cat&#8217;s head, threatening it for information on the sly while the owner is off in the kitchen making some tea. The details around that image have shifted a bit since I first came up with it &#8211; originally she&#8217;d gone there looking for the cat, forcing her to bluff her way past the owner, but now seeing the cat is a by-product of showing up to talk to someone else. On the whole it&#8217;s lots of fun &#8211; both because Aster is the kind of character who takes threatening a feline in her stride and because the cat is becoming increasingly creepy and unpleasant as I go along &#8211; but it&#8217;s also trading an aweful lot on backstory that&#8217;s hard to drop in on the fly. And, since I&#8217;m fond of over-complicating things, this backstory is completely divorced from the &#8220;book 2 with the same characters and setting&#8221; kind of backstory I was struggling with yesterday.</p>
<p>At present the plan is to continue forward and see how much I can get away with &#8211; explaining Aster and the Cat is actually pretty easy to do without disrupting the flow, but now that the third character has entered the scene it&#8217;s getting harder to hint at backstory without disrupting the rhythm of the scene. The easy solution is to start the scene a little earlier than it does, providing context for everything that follows, but I suspect this will make me sad because I kinda like the immediacy of Aster with a gun pointed at a Russian Blue&#8217;s forehead.</p>
<p>Not that there&#8217;s any real point to sharing this, it&#8217;s just my brain bubbling over because it&#8217;s been permitted to work on a story again.</p>
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